V0.2.1 : Reworked several of the new texts.

src/com/shatteredpixel/shatteredpixeldungeon/scenes/IntroScene.java

@@ -23,14 +23,13 @@ import com.shatteredpixel.shatteredpixeldungeon.windows.WndStory;
 public class IntroScene extends PixelScene {
 
 	private static final String TEXT =
-		"Ever since the fall of the Dwarven Metropolis below, this place has been more of a dungeon than a trade route. " +
-        "Many heroes of all kinds have ventured into the dungeon before you from the human city above. Some of them " +
+        "Many heroes have ventured into the dungeon before you from the city above. Some " +
         "have returned with treasures and magical artifacts, most have never been heard from again.\n\n" +
-        "None, however, have dared to venture all the way down and retrieved the Amulet of Yendor, " +
-        "which is said to be hidden in the depths. Others speak of a mad dwarvern king who’s desire for power " +
-        "awoke an ancient evil. Even now dark energy radiates from the dungeon, slowly making its way up into the city.\n\n" +
-        "You’re not sure how true the stories are, but you consider yourself ready for the challenge. Most importantly, " +
-        "you feel that fortune smiles upon you. It’s time to start your own adventure in Pixel Dungeon!";
+        "None, however, have ventured to the bottom and retrieved the Amulet of Yendor, " +
+        "which is said to be guarded by an ancient evil in the depths. " +
+        "Even now dark energy radiates from below, making its way up into the city.\n\n" +
+        "You consider yourself ready for the challenge. Most importantly, " +
+        "you feel that fortune smiles upon you. It's time to start your own adventure!";
 	
 	@Override
 	public void create() {